Term 2 writing sample

I am learning to:

1. Make my writing interesting by using describing words

2. Attempt to use capital letters and full-stops by myself

Success criteria:

I will know I can successfully do this when my writing shows

1. One or more Adjectives that match my picture

2.

• A capital letter at the start of my story and at the beginning of each new sentence.
•  A full-stop at the end of each of my ideas and at the end of my story.

Next steps:
1. Use describing words that match what I have drawn in my picture.
2. Attempt to use other forms of punctuation such as commas when writing a list.

Student comment:
I think i'm good at putting full-stops.
I think I could be better at doing capital letters at the start.