Term 1 writing sample

I am learning to:
Before writing: 
1. Draw a picture to plan for my writing and discuss what I am going to writing about 
During writing: 
2. Attempt to write a brief description about my made-up character 
What I need: to describe what my ani-mix looks like, sounds like, moves like etc 
After writing: 
3. Share my story with my buddy. 

 Success Criteria: Draw a detailed picture plan use adjectives to describe my picture 

 Teacher Comment: I like the way your words match your picture exactly.