ANZAC Writing

W.A.L.T  to write an ANZAC story

I learned to put more and more adjectives in my writing.

I achieved my goal because I put more tricky words in my writing.

Next time I will explain my character more.

When I woke up on the I could hear bullets crashing outside my window and start into the cold wet sea.
I climbed up the very step hill.
I put my khaki jacket bake into the cupboard and waited for the next war to start.

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