Success Criteria :
- List the materials and equipment
- Steps in order
- Action verbs
Zoe did a great job at achieving the success criteria. It is evident that she has action verbs, her steps are in order and she the outline of the piece of writing is correct. Zoe's next steps are to use the correct capital letter in the correct places as well as full stops. Seeing as this was a publishing tasks Zoe should have taken into account the editing she and the teacher had completed on her draft to have a neat published version without any mistakes.
Altogether Zoe completed a well organised and detailed piece of instruction. Well done Zoe.