W.A.L.T to write an ANZAC story
I learned to put more and more adjectives in my writing.
I achieved my goal because I put more tricky words in my writing.
Next time I will explain my character more.
When I woke up on the I could hear bullets crashing outside my window and start into the cold wet sea.
I climbed up the very step hill.
I put my khaki jacket bake into the cupboard and waited for the next war to start.
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